Looks REALLY nice, but I have a few pointers since you said you're still working.
I would suggest upping the contrast on her face and perhaps removing a few of the levels on her whole figure just to make her seem more graphical (for instance, all of the dark gray wrinkles on her jacket could be removed so that her jacket is just one solid graphic block of gray). Also, I would recommend removing the blurred edges on head of the flamingo and sticking with the crisp graphic style you've got going on in the rest of the image.
I LOVE the colors and composition, the only thing I might change there is to make the arch of x's to her left a little darker and/or brighter, b/c right now they look a little like a watermark rather than part of the piece.
Hope this helps! Keep up the great work!
Keep it up, looks awesome!
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I would suggest upping the contrast on her face and perhaps removing a few of the levels on her whole figure just to make her seem more graphical (for instance, all of the dark gray wrinkles on her jacket could be removed so that her jacket is just one solid graphic block of gray). Also, I would recommend removing the blurred edges on head of the flamingo and sticking with the crisp graphic style you've got going on in the rest of the image.
I LOVE the colors and composition, the only thing I might change there is to make the arch of x's to her left a little darker and/or brighter, b/c right now they look a little like a watermark rather than part of the piece.
Hope this helps! Keep up the great work!
Keep it up, looks awesome!
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If you're going to take someone on your train of thought, at least buy them a ticket first.
--
Save a drum; bang a drummer.
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--[My Band]--
///Big_Fiery_Kill_Rock__
Music:
[link]
--
Save a drum; bang a drummer.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--[My Band]--
///Big_Fiery_Kill_Rock__
Music:
[link]
--
Save a drum; bang a drummer.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--[My Band]--
///Big_Fiery_Kill_Rock__
Music:
[link]
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